The Cambrian Implosion

That supports it better and may do it's justice. All in all, the visual shows a good grasp of scenery. Dream on! 😊

may tweak it always later ;) it is always easier for your audience to understand follow your (metaphorical) language when the main message is told in coherency, then work in nuances ^^ the audio in itself needs some love on the structure, and a visual

In this, it's all over the place and needs cleaning up. A good guide is, what's the story you want to tell? Is it "the deep sea is harmonious and full of wonders"? Or is it "the deep sea is kinda weird and has it's own laws?" pick a story and tell it, you

floating effect, or move the group, then move individuals a wee bit, to make it more natural. Always try things out! The music pulls attention to it's discrepancy but lacks much visual support, apart from the also somewhat disparage flapping fins.

in order to avoid bringing too much attention where you don't want/need it. So maybe make the moving clown fish still or limit there movement a big deal. You could use the action recorder, move them just a wee bit, then play it at waay reduced speed for a

I quite liked the visual composition by itself, also good colour scheming with interesting contrast point, also lightnig was good, might even be enhanced with more defined light/dark area and vingette. IMO the movement would benefit from some consistency

I enjoyed this! As others have said, reminds me of Ponyo

Surreal, and pleasing!

Great work! Made me think of Ponyo :]