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The Cambrian Implosion

By SardineSlayer-YT

  • Tokumei-no-B
    Tokumei-no-B left some feedback
    I don't think whales existed in the Cambrian explosion
  • otogu
    otogu left some feedback
    good
  • ChrisContinues
    ChrisContinues left some feedback
    I thought you nailed the feel of being underwater. I also think that visually everything seems to fit together really well. I'm not too sure about the music. Maybe something a little slower? Either way though, great job and keep up the great work!
  • keegszzz
    keegszzz left some feedback
    Maybe turn down the main instrument volume. I do like the retro style though
  • YohanLibertto
    YohanLibertto left some feedback
    Sounds like underwater temple. Retro style.
  • NewVegasNick
    NewVegasNick left some feedback
    Better if the fish move
  • Ian-Mitchell
    Ian-Mitchell left some feedback
    Not sure if the percussion suits the rest of the song, but other than that it's great. Keep up the good work
  • Flay_D
    Flay_D left some feedback
    It's a good start! There’s quite a lot happening at once though. For example the glowing anemone on the left is drawing a lot of attention. Try to draw the viewers eye to the most important bit. You can use light/colour/motion to attract attention.
  • mttine
    mttine left some feedback
    I apologize, I have no meaningful feedback. I'm not versed in the genre, but from what I heard I quite enjoyed it. Some parts didn't land for me. It's positive, though
  • Enigma_0123
    Enigma_0123 left some feedback
    The music could use some harmonic restructuring. Chromatic scales and unresolved dissonance can create a sense of madness and chaos or a "demonic fun-house" effect, but it doesn't really work here in my opinion.
  • DimensionxDragon
    DimensionxDragon left some feedback
    Love the 8 bit music and the scenery, but a variety of camera angles would make it a lot better :)
  • Mochatron99
    Mochatron99 left some feedback
    Would love to see some moving creatures. Its a great start.
  • Tom_Frenzy
    Tom_Frenzy left some feedback
    Music is ok, farther in the song there is a sound that ruins the rhythm.Maybe it was intentional. The background looks pretty cool.
  • MyBr3wSki
    MyBr3wSki left some feedback
    Cool work wish i could walk around
  • ShadowFox382
    ShadowFox382 left some feedback
    Sounds like an old 8 bit video game
  • cannibal127_9
    cannibal127_9 left some feedback
    I love the Anemone! I also like how you make the foliage flow to mimic the sea movement. GREAT effect! Maybe some bubbles and some grade effects to add a bit more depth to the atmosphere? Great job all around!
  • MyPoeticJustice
    MyPoeticJustice left some feedback
    Love the artwork behind the piece. Great music!

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