Carcinoma: A 10 Minute Feature Film

Respectable effort for sure. But it's a little too on-the-nose and predictable. And the glitches really yank you out of the experience. Nonetheless, I hope they keep creating. Definitely some potential here.

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The Scene where he "drops the bag" is sooo good scripted. Overall there are some glitches, but the imperfect makes the movie so typical "Dreams-like" - so charming.

Wonderful short.

Nice job

So sad but still very well done ! Geat Job ! Thanks

Well done! Almost brought a tear to my eye

Well made.

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Well said... thru the eyes. I only wish the Forj car was a Fjord. Other than that, a true bull's-eye !

tragic story gave me sad emotions. but very well made. all said without a word spoken. - keep it up ^^

yeah, i like this mature style too dreams needs to evolve to having more variety.

A very solid short film, i like this "mature" style for a dream story, very nice work!

Fantastic!!!!

Presentation excellent , scene and sounds very cinematic very emotional , thanks sharing !

We need more people creating short films in Dreams. Looking good. I would suggest removing the imp completely. Second page of global settings.

One thing I'd say, the robbery should have been implied. The Dad should have walked out of his house with the mask and Bump action, then ran out the store, Bump action in hand with the mask, with alarms and people screaming in the background.

Most Dreams stuff doesn't feel very genuine, they have too much "Dreams" feel to it, not this. Passing, camera work, animation, all are amazing. The fact you can display so much emotion without facial animation, or voice acting is very impressive.

Cool little Story, Good Work.

Great movie, gutted it said to be continued i wanted MOREEEEEE! Cant wait too see the next part