Super Dreams Odyssey [working title]

Looks awesome. But if I hadn't played Super Mario Sunshine I wouldn't have know how to triple jump.

This is good!

Ok lemme try that again, its so awesome it just need Checkpoints for the red and blue level

100% Better! One last thing: try a different fleck type in the sky (tighter perhaps) and play around with the colour and horizon. I think if you get that right it'll pop even more.