IS : The Last Note Chapter 1 The Beholden Sun

Just letting everybody know you all can delete my characters in the AYs I'm not collaborating in anymore since I'll be inactive for a while. I'll be joining again by next month, sorry for the inconvenience.

I uh may need to cancel this for now and redo it when i have a better idea of what the first chapters plot should be and when i have a few more settings made cause i really have no idea of where to go from here

I'm thinking about making an AY for once, but I don't want to spend a lot of time on something people may not even like. So, any suggestions on an AY or IS that you guys think would be fun or interesting?

I really liked that chase with Joshua and Clyde XD

After anon

Really hope no one was ACTUALLY editing when I uploaded my edit after saying there was a storage issue.

Storage, I saved my edit.

Actually, I'll brb.

After anon

Forgot to change en's text

God you know my plot convince too well XD

I love how we're all just standing around him as he's passed out, but nobody's helping him

Man, I rarely make my characters bicker with someone else's lol

The funny thing is the second chapter has better planning... And i came up with the entire second chapter in like three hours XD

Yeah i have no idea anymore XD he's probably gonna faint next edit you can make your characters can make their definitive decision then XD

Uh... I'm gonna need to think a bit on my next edit XD

Trust me the story is gonna be a lot more serious then it seems right now XD especially en's backstory is a lot darker then it seems

There's nothing actually important on the scroll by the way XD

I just put a camera in the timeline next to En Niria.

After whoever

I guess ill make the edit tomorrow

hey
i have no excuse for being gone this time
i was just asleep

Does anyone wanna make any more edit's before i continue?

Oh god i just realized a way all the dots connect Cynthia's birth parents would most definitely do something like that

I will say that Cynthia does actually return to her home land quite often she sees it as her home also their home land couldn't actually publish a bounty as they aren't aligned with the united security forces

I just gifted my whole IRL friend group the Pickle Rick back bling in fortnite. Then we all played battle royale and got 3 squad wins in a row. I'm not sure if I should be proud or filled with regret XD

Also fun fact about the next edit ill make ive reran the scenario like over 100 times in my head and not a single time ive found a way that isn't stupidly cheesy XD