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"If I Could Move You"

By TheWaLrUs81

  • NinjaMicWZ
    NinjaMicWZ left a comment
    From one poet to another, that was legitimately great. Excellent, natural word choices, flow and structure. The content and concept really resonates with me. Cool, dry timing in your delivery too.
  • Majora011
    Majora011 left a comment
    Can you please stop sending me this
  • SynPhage
    SynPhage left a comment
    I really enjoy the poem. If I could suggest anything, it would be more visual stimulation of some kind to accompany the emotional themes. Thanks for sharing!
  • CANNON_SMOKE
    CANNON_SMOKE left a comment
    I had a real bravo moment.The darkness is all around and when we pretend its not there well that's when it grows and no amount of light can hold it back. So show your darkness every chance you get. I think we will all be better for it

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