One Day (VR Edition)

Stong stuff, impressive!

When you get to the end of the long halway in VR, the words are washed out by the white background, I wasn't able read it. Great job!

I felt that in my soul, fantastic job!

Good and simple storyteller, thanks for using my music.

Great storytelling and the tree setting was beautiful

This is great and very depressing haha

You say its not based on a true story, and yet it feels genuine

Nicely written story, propz and keep going ;)]

Very good writing ! 👍