We, 13

very aesthetic

It was interesting but found it quite slow. Got half way in act 2 before stopping

This needs a narrator lol, someone to speak it out loud with passion

And i dont think its necessarily a bad idea to break the scene up with your mini game, but itd work better if it related, like a sonar detecting their whereabouts or hacking their computer etc. If you cant then maybe go 100% story.

I really like the design of the aliens, the ominous ambience, and originality of this and all of your ideas so far.

My 2 cents: I think the text moves 2 slow, so an otherwise alluring scene starts to drag pretty quick even without the mini game.

Nice and weird :)

That was really great. I'm glad I stayed after the first instance of the oddly placed mini-game.
Only suggestions would be to move the 'Act 1' text so it's not behind the Dreams logo, and to finish with 'End of Act 1' instead of 'Act 2'.