The legend of heart of fire (wip)

There are A LOT of grammatical errors in the intro, you should have someone proofread it for you.

Some really nice work here. Great hand drawn style in the intro, nice design to levels. Platform jumps can be a little tricky, especially when running, as puppet's momentum can carry him over the edge of platform after landing.

Well done, couldn't finish it I got frustrated by moving platform jump. The combat and exp'loration is good but a little repetitive at some point. Keep the good work !

Wow! What a nice creation i am totally inspired pls also have a look on an action rpg i am working on and tell me wat to improved pls ty! Name of my creation is "Jacob & Jonas : Dimension of Time" thanks!

Well, this is a well put together game i see the souls and Zelda inspiration for this. The story is delivered in a entertaining way by means of a book. If anything its atmosphere is similar to Legend a film with a dark fairy tale setting.

I suggest adding a camera rig to your character. It isn't too difficult, and there are some great tutorials on YouTube, if don't know how to.
The constant self adjusting of the default camera is bothersome.
A really great game you've made here.

This is actually incredible! It's all well put-together: the great, highly expressive player character, the intricate level design, the immersive audio, and exciting storytelling and lore. Just improve the combat a bit and this will be near-perfect!

Gg

The opening cutscene was awesome - I haven't seen something done quite like that before. I would have liked the opening circular area to be smaller - it took a while just to walk around.

Running should be toggle or on a different button. Holding L3 is a pain. Other than that I enjoyed this

Impressive work! Interesting to see how big a level can be while still running smoothly. Was sometimes able to progress without having all the souls in the early part of the game.

Wow, how long did this take? Great work! But there are obvious flaws to be worked out.

Funny intro and plot hook cinematic! Tutorializing the controls through gameplay would make them easier to learn.

Lots to love about this one. Great music! But lots of room for improvement also. I got stuck in the circular maze, door at the end was closed. And PLEASE change run to toggle, or another button than L3!

I totally liked to explore the dungeons, the jumping challenges however . . . I've never been good in jumping challenges! 😢 . . . but its not over yet! 😼