Dream Journal - The Gateway

That was really good, There were many times I was expecting a scary creature to appear in the dungeon or inside that house, could you add something creeping around that dungeon downstairs.

Me encanto <3

This had me instantly hooked! This felt like an immersive audio book peer pressuring me to continue. I can't wait for more!

It has potential and the story is good, but you need a better mic, i guess. Good Work :-)

You could've made this look a little more realistic by fixing lighting, contrast, smoothing, and the overall saturation considering this creation is a bit bland. You also could've added characters that fit your story that your telling for the full tale.

A better microphone may come in handy if this is your genre of creation's. The story is okay in term's of horror, but i'm just wondering who thought it out, not only does the story sound like whoever made it was in a rush, but they seem untrained in a way

Hi Guts275. After playing, I was charmed. You have a great game here, not complex, but a great narrative going on. You have a great voice for VO. Definitely you should continue this. Really well done. I do love a good story level mate :)

Anyone else reminded of "Dear Esther"? Great work! I enjoy this kind of creativity over hack & slash or shoot 'em ups anyday.

Lighting and detail in most scenes is spectacular. Voiceover could use a tiny bit of reverb to help it mix with the ambient sounds. Not a fan of the plodding footsteps. Originality and unique style made it better than most stuff out there. Keep going!

Lovely scene designs and lighting!

Altough the game is very slow and a little bit buggy (Collision) the idea behind is good! Advantages are the voice of the storyteller and graphics in dungeon. Game needs more polishment but it worked for me! I like it! :)

The scenery is really awesome!

Nice visuals. The narration is too muffled though, it could use subtitles.