Sakura's Destiny

Good effort, would be cool if you could reinteract with NPCs. Not sure about the backtracking to find key section. Really liked the visual effects in surrounding areas.

Awesome game!

Wish thier was more but it was... AWESOME you really out did yourself. Keep it up!!!

Just Amazing!!

This is really interesting and has some cool vibes and details, keep on polishing this and maybe use some original music :)

This game had a touching story about a girl dealing with her death. It reminded me of a ghibli film Spirited Away. I wouldn't have chapter transition since the story is shorter.

The transition between the house and the school was really nice.

Absolutely amazing work! I really enjoyed the art and story. The anime style opening was great. It's cool to see people making longer experiences on Dreams.

Really good and the potential is there but definitely needs polish. Text progression should also be done by pressing x. Otherwise good job.

Speaking of bare feet why does the man in white stare at Sakura's feet all the time? That's creepy as hell. I was convinced he was a bad guy with a foot thing._.

I think it'd odd they wouldn't give Sakura a uniform to work. Sure it might only be for a number of scenes it will make it more believable instead of her wearing her torn clothes and bare feet to work.

In fights the umbrella doesn't really feel like it's hitting anything, makes sense for the ghosts at least. Consider adding some swipe trails to the umbrella swings, slight controller vibration on hit, some impact sounds when making contact.

The zoom in on the chef's pits is unnecessary since Sakura already hold her nose, states how he and the area stink, and the stain is very visible without zooming in.

There is some cases in this where less would better. Try limiting the use of the opening song for example, definitly keep it for the ghost fight but reconsider some of the other applications.

In some areas and cutscenes a waterfall sound effect is the loudest thing in the scene. You might need to go about about and reduce the audio range or add a sound filter so it's not so abrasive.

Still playing but for feedback so far: Make the 3 intro scenes at the beginning skippable or cut it down to 1 scene instead. It feels a bit unnecessary to have go through those scenes since you already have this lovely anime-isnpired opening.