Return of the Deadbeat Detective

Excellent. Great use of colour and sound throughout. The cast of characters personalities really come through in your writing. Intermission was a nice touch too. Another good job!

Great work, really interesting story that I had a lot of fun narrating on stream. Bold art style fits the vibe which went to some dark places! One complaint, walking is painfully slow. Looking forward to solving more cases!

Really enjoyed 2nd one keep up great work 10/10