The Shinigami

Maybe you could have put in some notes around to tell a bit of a story of what happend, but overall great job :)

Y-axis

Dang, this is awesome! Really potent horror atmosphere and some seriously alarming developments had me literally on the edge of my seat. A great horror experience! I see you plan updates, so I'll hold off on making critical remarks. For now...Great job!

This deserves an MM pick, i can tell a lot of effort has been put into designing the layout of the area, the pacing as well as offering some neat visual scenes. Well done.

There's a lot of attention to graphic detail which is good to see, but I think the audio could be stronger (roomtone, music, audio cues, etc.), and there's not much of a story. Thoroughly creepy though!

Spooky, well done! Ending scene seems a little confusing/rushed