Kreya : An Explosion Viewed From Very Far Away

Great job! You're ramping up the stakes in this story. It's building to some form of climax; That's a good sign. There's just one suggestion I have: More transitions to provide a more unique flow. Like how you made the wiper look like blinking.

******* AMAZING!!!

Very enjoyable.

I absolutely love the art style/colour palette you're going with. Really good so far.