Youngtext - For Real Rap

There is room to improve. The flow and the beat feel like they get choked. You could try to match syllables with the drums, you could also put a bit more "attitude" into it. Getting praise is good but thinking all is already good enough is destructive.

I think your rap deserves a more musical remix with a thick beat

I try never to be negative in dreams but this is just bad you need a better beat then you need to rap confidently to that beat with more interesting lyrics, if its prewritten memorise it beforehand if its freestyle you need to practice more, sorry

Dababy 2.0 XD