A Bridge Between Worlds

The quality of writing is excellent -- and what an amazingly oppressive ambience!
I found it to be quite a captivating journey!

You've done an excellent job of creating a palpable sense of foreboding and even cosmic horror. The one thing that took me out of the experience a bit was the somewhat slapdash (and inconsistent) design of the text boxes.

Excellent! Love the minimalistic approach. Audio is mesmerizing.