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FUNTASTICO!

An intriguing narrative, with fun world-building. However, the ending had me questioning the nature of everything that had come before, which leaves me pondering if it was A) genius or B) a cheap deus ex machina that didn't offer a satisfying payoff...

Wow, I loved that. Literally had me audibly gasp "what?!"
I was so interested in the world building, so much mystery and potential as you progress. Each section was a good length, never too long.
Fantastic work.

Pretty decent start! I would like to see the game continue. You have great level design skills; making the most use of small spaces. Improve your spelling and grammer. Work on day/night lighting.
⭐ ⭐ ⭐ 3/5

That was great.

Very cool